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reginald
April 13th, 2007, 02:50 PM
Wolf and I


Wolf his amber eyes shining in the moonlit night
He was brave knowing this was the final fight
Those cowards hid their faces under masks
I did what I had to complete the task
When they ran away in fear
I said it is me and I am here
Then I noticed it was not me who they feared
It was the demons that neared and neared
They saw the mark upon my forehead it protected me,
but i wish it gave me courage
It was time to fulfill my destiny
But it was wolf who took the last leap
As I do this thing they call spirit walk my body felt like an empty stalk
My souls free,and my mind rushing
I could posess and control anything
Thats what I thought until it started happening
I could not control this animals rage
The rage of an arctic bear
I would be trapped that filled me with despair
Then I knew it could feel my feelings
The Great hunter of all things
Now in my will
Then I saw the Forest floor meet the ice floor of the north



THE END tell me what you think of it

thewhitewolf
April 13th, 2007, 06:27 PM
thast really good!
are you new to the clan?

thewhitewolf

spinlippy
April 13th, 2007, 06:46 PM
yeah tis good, you should get a cool riff going on in the backround, whack a load of distortion on it, get a bass and drums working around the riff, a guitar to do a cool solo, totally blast out the lyrics and what do you have... an awesome metal song...

Ethaneo
April 14th, 2007, 10:22 AM
Good! GLAD YOU HAVE BEEN INSPIRED BY THE CLAN!

Kallydog
April 23rd, 2007, 07:15 PM
That was amazing glad to hear you reg what a talent!keep going give us somemore!

Akhlut
April 23rd, 2007, 07:24 PM
Wrong part of the forum but good poem. :thumb: It belongs in Clan Art.

greyeyedwolf
April 23rd, 2007, 07:31 PM
wow that rocks!!!

biki
April 23rd, 2007, 09:04 PM
yeah tis good, you should get a cool riff going on in the backround, whack a load of distortion on it, get a bass and drums working around the riff, a guitar to do a cool solo, totally blast out the lyrics and what do you have... an awesome metal song...

*rolls eyes* only spin would say that XD
welcome to the clan! good poem!

Lovegod
April 24th, 2007, 06:53 AM
yes of course he's new look at his post count
and nice poem i like it!!

reginald
April 24th, 2007, 02:01 PM
thank you all for the comments on my poem i just relized that uh i was suppose to put it in clan art but oh well

Ethaneo
April 24th, 2007, 02:24 PM
Nice poem@!

Aquila
April 24th, 2007, 04:08 PM
heya!
thats a really cool poem!!!
wish i could do that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
are you new???

Lovegod
April 25th, 2007, 01:47 AM
yes look at his post count...
i've never written long poems before, only limericks

GreyHunter
April 25th, 2007, 04:50 PM
wow, pretty good!

Lovegod
April 26th, 2007, 06:27 AM
heres a good limerick:

there was a woman in pennsylvania
who insisted that she was in virginia
she ran into pittsburgh
but not an iceberg
and somehow ended up in australia
:P

chronicles
April 28th, 2007, 04:06 AM
Those poems rock!!!! I wish i was that good.