flameboy
January 19th, 2008, 09:41 PM
Getting His Comupence
Ortia tracked the the deer through the forest. She tried to make as little noise as possible. The deer stopped at a stream to have a drink. Now was her chance! She nocked an arrow to her bow, took aim and... TWANG. The arrow whistled through the air and planted itself to the left of the front leg.
She yelled in delight. This was her first big kill in a long time. She ran over to the corpse and, thanking the world spirit, she set to work.
First, she skinned the deer for clothes and water containers. Then, she slit the deer's belly open and pulled all the guts out. This was the bit she hated the most. Wincing she worked harder to get the job done.
'What are you doing, Ortia', a voice said behind her.
She jumped and spun around. There was Gunna sitting nonchalantly on a fallen log. He got up and surveyed the kill.
'Nice work, you've got loads there so you won't mind me taking my share, will you'. He said smiling.
Ortia cursed to herself. This wasn't the first time Gunna had tried to take her stuff and it probably wont be the last. She stood up. She wasn't some helpless girl like Gunna thought so.
Okay, I have an idea', she said 'how about we fight for it'.
Gunna seemed taken aback by her proposal.
'What, I mean, Yeah, but,' he stuttered. 'Eh okay.
He then took control over himself.
'With knives or without', he asked.
'With knives'. she replied coolly.
She drew her knife. Gunna smirked and drew his own knife. They circled each other warily. Suddenly, Gunna lunged forward with his knife. Ortia dodged and attacked him herself. It was time to finish this. She started forwards, slashing and cutting and slicing. Gunna faltered and beads of sweat appeared on his brow. Ortia lunged forward. Gunna swept her knife aside with his own one and kicked her in the chest. Ortia fell to the ground, winded. Gunna walked over and stood over her.
'I win', he taunted her.
'This isn't over, chubby' She said through gritted teeth.
She kicked his leg and he fell over. She rolled over and got up. Gunna was up as well. Ortia could see that he was angry. With an outraged roar, Gunna charged at her. Ortia stepped smartly to one side and stuck out her foot. Gunna tripped and went flying and smashed his head against a tree. Ortia pounced on him and put her knife to his throat.
'If you value your life, go away', she said to him in menacing tone.
He scrambled away and started to half run, half stumble away through the forest. Ortia got back to the deer. She had a little feeling that she won't being seeing much of him again!
The End
Ortia tracked the the deer through the forest. She tried to make as little noise as possible. The deer stopped at a stream to have a drink. Now was her chance! She nocked an arrow to her bow, took aim and... TWANG. The arrow whistled through the air and planted itself to the left of the front leg.
She yelled in delight. This was her first big kill in a long time. She ran over to the corpse and, thanking the world spirit, she set to work.
First, she skinned the deer for clothes and water containers. Then, she slit the deer's belly open and pulled all the guts out. This was the bit she hated the most. Wincing she worked harder to get the job done.
'What are you doing, Ortia', a voice said behind her.
She jumped and spun around. There was Gunna sitting nonchalantly on a fallen log. He got up and surveyed the kill.
'Nice work, you've got loads there so you won't mind me taking my share, will you'. He said smiling.
Ortia cursed to herself. This wasn't the first time Gunna had tried to take her stuff and it probably wont be the last. She stood up. She wasn't some helpless girl like Gunna thought so.
Okay, I have an idea', she said 'how about we fight for it'.
Gunna seemed taken aback by her proposal.
'What, I mean, Yeah, but,' he stuttered. 'Eh okay.
He then took control over himself.
'With knives or without', he asked.
'With knives'. she replied coolly.
She drew her knife. Gunna smirked and drew his own knife. They circled each other warily. Suddenly, Gunna lunged forward with his knife. Ortia dodged and attacked him herself. It was time to finish this. She started forwards, slashing and cutting and slicing. Gunna faltered and beads of sweat appeared on his brow. Ortia lunged forward. Gunna swept her knife aside with his own one and kicked her in the chest. Ortia fell to the ground, winded. Gunna walked over and stood over her.
'I win', he taunted her.
'This isn't over, chubby' She said through gritted teeth.
She kicked his leg and he fell over. She rolled over and got up. Gunna was up as well. Ortia could see that he was angry. With an outraged roar, Gunna charged at her. Ortia stepped smartly to one side and stuck out her foot. Gunna tripped and went flying and smashed his head against a tree. Ortia pounced on him and put her knife to his throat.
'If you value your life, go away', she said to him in menacing tone.
He scrambled away and started to half run, half stumble away through the forest. Ortia got back to the deer. She had a little feeling that she won't being seeing much of him again!
The End