whitefang
January 5th, 2008, 12:25 PM
The forest looked golden in the autom sunlight, the world bright.The birds were twitering and roebuck was everywhere, but something was wrong. Triss could sense it.
Back at camp, the mage had told Triss of a brother of hers. she had told her that her brother did not know of her and her mother had died.Triss had never known her family so she had decided to go find him in seal clan.
Triss had lived near the sea mother for two days now and Triss didn't like the silence around the air.
"Who are you?" said a male voice.
Triss grabbed her knife and spun round. A man grabbed her knife arm and twisted it. Triss leaped behind the man and dug her knee into his back. She jumped back and ran at him again only this time with her knife. She pointed it at his throat.
"Who are you?" she said.
The man had a seal skin parka with some blubber poking out from his parka's neck. He looked ragged. He had blood on his face and stood about 6 foot tall.
"I am of seal clan. What about you?" he answered.
Triss debated with herself whether to tell him the truth.
"I am Triss of Viper clan. I am looking for Blaise of seal clan. Do you know him?" she asked carefully, knife drawn at the ready.
" I am Blaise of seal clan. What is it you seek from me?" the man said.
Triss sat up and a look of joy swept across her face. She put her knife back into it's sheath.
"I am your sister, Blaise." Triss said it dully as if she was bored. The truth was she was thrilled to bits.
Blaise started to run away. Triss ran after him a little, shouting things like 'whats wrong'. He didn't answer so Triss went back to her clan drowning in sorrow. She had done what she had set out to do. There was no need for her to stay here. As she headed back to Viper Rocks she thought about the sea mother and turned. She ran tho the sea mother and made an offering of grass. she started on the long way home, thinking of her brother.
When she reached her clan, Blaise was already there. He was in the leaders tent, yelling something about 'not telling'. Triss realized that her brother didn't want a sister in that instant. She got her hunting gear and ran out of camp. triss She started to cry as soon as she was out of hearing range with her clan. She saw Blaise running towards her. Then she fainted.
Triss woke up and found herself in a seal clan tent. She looked down and saw that she had a seal parka on instead of her forest one.
" Hello little sister" said a man as he walked through the doorway. Triss squinted and saw that the man was Blaise. She jumped up and hugged him.
" Your now seal clan, i think" he said.
" Thank you" said Triss.
Later that day, Triss found out that her mother lived in seal clan aswell as her brother.
At night Triss walked to her mothers tent and asked why Blaise had changed his mind.
" He told me that you remind him of his father" her mother said.
Triss walked to her own tent and whispered.
"Thank you world spirit, thank you"
She sat under the moonlight an sighed happily. Blaise came up behind her and they hugged.
" I never knew i had a sister and responded wronly. im sorry" he whispered
*its the best i could do. wish me luck:horseshoe::horseshoe:*
* I don't have word count... Can u tell me where to find it.*
Back at camp, the mage had told Triss of a brother of hers. she had told her that her brother did not know of her and her mother had died.Triss had never known her family so she had decided to go find him in seal clan.
Triss had lived near the sea mother for two days now and Triss didn't like the silence around the air.
"Who are you?" said a male voice.
Triss grabbed her knife and spun round. A man grabbed her knife arm and twisted it. Triss leaped behind the man and dug her knee into his back. She jumped back and ran at him again only this time with her knife. She pointed it at his throat.
"Who are you?" she said.
The man had a seal skin parka with some blubber poking out from his parka's neck. He looked ragged. He had blood on his face and stood about 6 foot tall.
"I am of seal clan. What about you?" he answered.
Triss debated with herself whether to tell him the truth.
"I am Triss of Viper clan. I am looking for Blaise of seal clan. Do you know him?" she asked carefully, knife drawn at the ready.
" I am Blaise of seal clan. What is it you seek from me?" the man said.
Triss sat up and a look of joy swept across her face. She put her knife back into it's sheath.
"I am your sister, Blaise." Triss said it dully as if she was bored. The truth was she was thrilled to bits.
Blaise started to run away. Triss ran after him a little, shouting things like 'whats wrong'. He didn't answer so Triss went back to her clan drowning in sorrow. She had done what she had set out to do. There was no need for her to stay here. As she headed back to Viper Rocks she thought about the sea mother and turned. She ran tho the sea mother and made an offering of grass. she started on the long way home, thinking of her brother.
When she reached her clan, Blaise was already there. He was in the leaders tent, yelling something about 'not telling'. Triss realized that her brother didn't want a sister in that instant. She got her hunting gear and ran out of camp. triss She started to cry as soon as she was out of hearing range with her clan. She saw Blaise running towards her. Then she fainted.
Triss woke up and found herself in a seal clan tent. She looked down and saw that she had a seal parka on instead of her forest one.
" Hello little sister" said a man as he walked through the doorway. Triss squinted and saw that the man was Blaise. She jumped up and hugged him.
" Your now seal clan, i think" he said.
" Thank you" said Triss.
Later that day, Triss found out that her mother lived in seal clan aswell as her brother.
At night Triss walked to her mothers tent and asked why Blaise had changed his mind.
" He told me that you remind him of his father" her mother said.
Triss walked to her own tent and whispered.
"Thank you world spirit, thank you"
She sat under the moonlight an sighed happily. Blaise came up behind her and they hugged.
" I never knew i had a sister and responded wronly. im sorry" he whispered
*its the best i could do. wish me luck:horseshoe::horseshoe:*
* I don't have word count... Can u tell me where to find it.*