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Stelleluna
September 5th, 2007, 08:51 PM
it's not that good but here it is
Soaring through the sky,
Spreading your silver wings,
I wish you could see how beautiful you are
The sea is sparkling with your glow,
How the clouds flow
Will never fallow the beating of my heart,
When I see…
The sea eagle.
Stelleluna
Bird Of Prey
September 7th, 2007, 08:22 AM
Short'n'sweet. I like it.
corlupa
September 7th, 2007, 11:10 PM
I like poems are always good I was thinking of doing a sea eagle one myself but I didn't good thing yours is better
Cajomo
September 9th, 2007, 01:56 PM
Interesting... i really enjoy reading other people poems as im not a very experience poet...
Blackwolf
September 10th, 2007, 01:55 PM
Nice. It may be short but it's good.
Stelleluna
September 13th, 2007, 12:45 AM
ya a little to short.I made it up in like 1 min.
honshuwolf
September 24th, 2007, 12:40 AM
ya a little to short.I made it up in like 1 min.
All that for just only 1 min? Wow, you're good, I'm good at writing but I don't think I'm that great at poetry:drunk:
Stelleluna
September 24th, 2007, 02:12 PM
I was thinking about whitch one i should wright about and the words just came slipping.
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