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bitayamoka
August 22nd, 2007, 04:47 PM
Hello everyone! I'm bitayamoka.
Because my English is not good, I can not post readily, but I enjoy The Clan every time.
I want to participate in art competition and post my Torak art.
Because this theme was Torak, of course I drew him, and the indispensable his brother Wolf.
http://www.ancientdarkness.info/theclancompe07summer01.jpg
This imaged "Wolf Brother" as you understood it from the size of Wolf.
Torak has pack, bow, arrows, and axe. Because knife is caught in the rear of the body, we can not see it.
About the bow, hunting people tend to use the short bow generally.
But I asked Michelle in letter whether Torak's bow was long or short and she said that Torak used the longbow.
I drew the axe in consultation with a restored axe of Middle Stone Age.
About art materials.
I drew the base line with a mechanical pencil and I scanned it and colored it in a PC with Corel Painter 6.
http://www.ancientdarkness.info/theclancompe07summer02.jpg
During SW and SE.
The art materials are the same as the first piece.
I look forward to next art competition!
ScarWolf
August 22nd, 2007, 04:55 PM
Wow Bityamoka! These are fantastic! Your drawing has an awesome style, and your colouring and shading is just great.
Fantastic... Good luck! :thumb:
Great wolf in the sky
August 22nd, 2007, 05:00 PM
As scar said,you have a fantastic style of drawing Bityamoka,and the way you have actually researched how the axe should be drawn shows real commitment.Well done,im hoping you win with these
Daenerys
August 22nd, 2007, 05:05 PM
WONDERFUL job! I have nothing more to say because it has already been said by Gwolf and ScarWolf. So I will just tell you it is AMAAAAAZING :)
Phantom Wolf
August 22nd, 2007, 05:43 PM
ohh wow...I'm in love with your art. o_o It's just amazing, the colouring and everything! well done and keep up the fantastic work!
Nigilynog
August 22nd, 2007, 06:03 PM
Hurray! I was hoping that you'd enter - I saw you looking at the thread the other day and I've seen your art before. Fantastic as usual. Looking forward to seeing your entries for the other competitions as well!
-Nigilynog
Clan Guardian
Leka
August 22nd, 2007, 06:15 PM
I saw your art before and was hoping you'd enter (although almost not hoping, since your art is fantastic). Well done!
Molly Mawk
August 22nd, 2007, 07:22 PM
Yaay, I've seen your fan art before as well, it's great. :D
And researching what the things looked like is really helpful isn't it? :P heh heh.
corlupa
August 22nd, 2007, 07:37 PM
that is awesome I don't know if I've ever seen anyone draw that well WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Crimsonfred
August 22nd, 2007, 07:45 PM
WOW!!!!!! that is AMAZING!!!! they look so real!!! great job!!!
Bird Of Prey
August 22nd, 2007, 11:41 PM
You will win. No contest
Blackwolf
August 23rd, 2007, 01:01 PM
Geez My entry seems rubbish compared to yours. Yours is great. Well done. I hope it wins.
catfan
August 23rd, 2007, 01:27 PM
I like it. ^_^
I like how you drew the ears.
It's hard to draw them. D=
But you did a good job. =D
Geez My entry seems rubbish compared to yours
I like your entry too! =O
If you think yours is bad, you should see the drawings that I've seen people make!
bitayamoka
August 23rd, 2007, 03:35 PM
Thank you for all comments!
I am glad if you like my Torak arts.
I am glad that I can see Torak which various people drew in this competition.
I think that each Toraks are individual and splendid.
The arts of the characters whom clanners created is splendid, but I want see more fan arts of the characters who appears in the novel (Torak, Wolf, Renn...etc...) in CLAN ART!
Renak
August 23rd, 2007, 05:35 PM
Aww man, what's the point of entering? You're pefect! I love your art! Every time I see it, I have to burst out and scream "OH MY GOD, THAT'S FREAKIN' AWESOME!!!"
I LURV your stuff! I just can't get enough of it! I wish'd you'd put more!
Renak
August 23rd, 2007, 05:45 PM
I wish I knew how to do that! I mean, how do you get the coloring so PERFECT?!
fox
August 23rd, 2007, 09:24 PM
I vote Bita XD
anyway, the axe is of a more Adze type design, the axes used by stone agers were still axe shaped, but I like how youa ctually researched it XD
Swan Mage
August 24th, 2007, 01:30 AM
That is awsome I really hope you win.
Renak
August 24th, 2007, 01:33 AM
Oh well, I'm 'onna enter anyway.
Ethaneo
August 24th, 2007, 01:04 PM
OOh...speechless... Alot of artists on the Clan. Makes me feel im horrible at art...=p
bitayamoka
August 24th, 2007, 04:01 PM
Thank you for comments, everyone!
To Renak
It is ability of the tools if how to put my colors is good.
Painting software and pen tablet will be excellent...!
To fox
Your indication is always accurate!
Because the word which means adze were used in the Japanese, I imaged a type of this.
It seemed to be the Bronze Age mainly that this type came to be used, but this type seems to have been already used in the Middle Stone Age.
Still, maybe though you are young, you know various things.
Amazing!
fox
August 24th, 2007, 06:47 PM
oh. dont get me wrong Bitamoyaka, they used Adze in the ston eage, in fact, one is mentioned in outcast, anyway, Im not actually that young.
18?
lol, anyway, yeh I've done about four years of wilderness survival or "earth skills" training, so I've researched lots of primitive tools and techniques to help me, but yeh, I'm not sure If I said before, but the feet need a it of thinning down, or shaping, Im not sure, but apart from that theyre brilliant, I would enter myself, but the clan guardians arent allowed :(
Hominaka
August 24th, 2007, 07:36 PM
*falls off seat in amazement* OH MY GOD THEY ARE IMENSE!!!! the drawing is fantastic and the colouring is awesome!
:pawprint:
ShadowWolfGirl
August 24th, 2007, 10:31 PM
"Wow" said ShadowWolfGirl weakly. "Those are REALLY good"
fox
August 24th, 2007, 11:33 PM
lol
you dont need to reply in third person in the clan art section XD
ShadowWolfGirl
August 25th, 2007, 01:44 PM
I know. For fun.
Wolf x Spirit
August 25th, 2007, 02:36 PM
*jaw drops open* youre amazing!
urrm, thats an axe?
ShadowWolfGirl
August 25th, 2007, 06:58 PM
I still can't get over how good they are.
Leka
August 25th, 2007, 09:03 PM
I saw your art on your site I think. Really fantastic, well done!
Fell
August 25th, 2007, 10:26 PM
"My god..." That's what I said when I saw your pictures.
They are brilliant, I was stunned. I love your style of drawing, and the colouring is fantastic. That's exactly how I imagine Torak.
Well done, some amazing artwork there. :)
bitayamoka
August 26th, 2007, 01:10 PM
Thank you for all of you comments!
To fox
You are young enough when you compare it with me.
You have a splendid experience!
I want to watch it for a hand not only I watch various tools with a photograph if there is an opportunity.
To Wolf x Spirit's
It is not an axe, it is an adze.
Please read comment of #17,#21,#22 in detail.
bitayamoka
August 26th, 2007, 01:12 PM
It is the third entry.
http://www.ancientdarkness.info/theclancompe07summer03.jpg
Torak is tracking.
Cajomo
August 26th, 2007, 01:20 PM
1 word: ABSOLOUTLY FANTASTIC. lol i wish i could draw that well! Thats almost just how i imagined Torak!
Bird Of Prey
August 26th, 2007, 05:51 PM
Thats exactly how I imagined Torak though I imagined the skin alittle paler and the hair a little darker...
Daenerys
August 26th, 2007, 05:56 PM
That's AMAZING! Again, just about exactly how I imagined Torak!
ShadowWolfGirl
August 26th, 2007, 07:06 PM
I know. I almost fell over in shock when i saw it^_^
YEEEEEEE GIVE MORE!
bitayamoka
August 27th, 2007, 03:14 PM
Thank you for all of you comments!
To Bird Of Prey
Actually, I usually color Torak's hair a little darker.:smile:
fox
August 27th, 2007, 05:45 PM
Torak is supposed to have dark skin, just the way Bita does it.
Wait, Bitamoyaka, how old are you?
Great wolf in the sky
August 27th, 2007, 06:03 PM
in bita's third picture,what is the curved thing at toraks side?
Twisted Torak
August 27th, 2007, 06:04 PM
i think the thing at his side is his axe but i'm not entirely sure.
fox
August 27th, 2007, 07:11 PM
I think....
its always a good Idea to read previous comments, so pelase do, and it will be explained :D
Great wolf in the sky
August 27th, 2007, 07:14 PM
No i did read them,its just i didnt think it looked like an axe 0.o anyway,thats fantastic work bitaymoka
Toraks Twin Sister
August 27th, 2007, 11:32 PM
WOW!!!!! That is amazing!
bitayamoka
August 29th, 2007, 04:41 PM
Thank you for all of you comments!
To Great wolf
About axe, please read comment of #17,#21,#22 in detail.
To fox
Even if you do not believe it because my English and arts are poor, I graduated from the college at least.
Anyway, thank you for the follow-up about the axe!
Great wolf in the sky
August 29th, 2007, 04:48 PM
Okay thank you bitayamoka,i think i understand about the axe now,and your english isnt actually that bad.I know a few people that have english as their first language,and they still manage to speak it alot worse than you.
But once again,fantastic work,i've always enjoyed seeing your pictures,and you have an art style that i really like.I hope you keep drawing and showing off your skills :D
Ice Bear fighter
September 1st, 2007, 11:32 AM
Those drawings are unbelievably good! Well worth being on the slideshow above!
It must have taken a long time.
aussiearcticwolfqueen
September 1st, 2007, 12:41 PM
that is awesome I don't know if I've ever seen anyone draw that well WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I agree with that! lol
WWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!
pach
September 1st, 2007, 12:50 PM
wow your art is amazing!i am a pretty good drawer why self but i could never draw them like that.went on the website and looked at the other drawings.they are fantastic.hope you win.
Lottie the Lynx
September 1st, 2007, 01:02 PM
okay, I have just seen this and it is AMAZING! bitamayoka you are great at drawing and you researched it as well and everything
I like it because it's not manga or anime and It really feels like it should, well done!!!
Leka
September 1st, 2007, 04:00 PM
Well done on getting it on the slideshow!
bitayamoka
September 1st, 2007, 05:02 PM
Thank you for all of you!
I'm very glad that so a lot of people like my Torak art.
I feel honored that my art is put on slide show.
It was the greatest thing that I could see the splendid arts of many talented people in this competition.
I love that I see arts almost as same as drawing!
I want to entry for next art competition if possible.I look forward to I can see a lot of wonderful arts then!
Good luck to all who does entry for next writing competition . My English is poor, but I want to enjoy a wonderful entry of all of you.
Shanak
September 2nd, 2007, 05:10 PM
your handy work is incredible, brings the story to life even more almost as I had pictured Torak. Very talented :-)
Blacknight
September 3rd, 2007, 12:59 AM
Those are nice! Awsome ^_^
thewhitewolf
September 3rd, 2007, 01:41 PM
wow! these are amazing! Well Done!
Also, your english is REALLY good, much better than anything I could do with a language different to my own!
You should be really proud of your artwork! Its beautiful! Well Done!
RkeepR
September 3rd, 2007, 11:22 PM
Woah! This is amazing! You drew the two of them exactly as I had envisioned them! Way to go, and the best of luck to you in future competitions!
white owl
September 4th, 2007, 12:03 PM
wow your drawings ROCK!
monkey
September 4th, 2007, 05:54 PM
that is briliint
wolf of the forest
September 5th, 2007, 06:20 PM
WOW! i love the way you draw it brings out charicter in the subject/s. i love to draw myself and im working on one peice of torak and wolf right now but if i thought it was coming on well then these put it to shame. i love the chronicles of ancient darkness and i must have read the first 3 at least 5 times and i cant think of any detail youve left out. if you dont win that contest ill eat my sketch!!!
Apple Half
September 5th, 2007, 06:25 PM
Yup, awesome! Especially the faces. I hope the charaters in the movie will not differ too much from what you've drawn. They're cool.
kitaly
September 7th, 2007, 11:14 AM
WOW hat's amazing. My mates say that I'm good at drawing and say I could enter an art comp. but mine are nothing compared to your's.
Stalker
September 7th, 2007, 07:10 PM
That is absolutely amazing!!!!!!!!!! Would it be OK for me to print them off to put on the wall in my room?
Stalker
Wolf Kin
September 8th, 2007, 02:11 AM
WOW!!! they are fantastic!!!!!! Stalker has allready asked my question for me!
Renian of the Wolf Clan
September 10th, 2007, 07:09 AM
yeah same here! would it be okay with you bitayamoka? i absolutely love the art you've drawn and i've looked at your website.i wont go ahead and print them unless its okay with you first :D
SheWolfAtSoul
September 10th, 2007, 06:26 PM
love the art! wish i could do that
Rek
September 11th, 2007, 07:26 AM
This is absolutely amazing! Wolf is amazingly drawn!
The pack
September 11th, 2007, 03:32 PM
This is absolutely amazing!!!!!!!!!!! is there going to be a movie?
Wolf by bone
Nigilynog
September 11th, 2007, 08:32 PM
This is absolutely amazing!!!!!!!!!!! is there going to be a movie?
That's an odd thing to say, and this isn't a thread for talking about the film. Please please please search the forums before asking something like that. All the known information about the film is in a sticky at the top of the campfire, here (http://www.torak.info/forums/showthread.php?t=12480).
Seriously though, we've had so many people repeat the same questions over and over again. Use the Clan! It's got all the information you could possibly need. It doesn't take much effort to click 'search' and then type in 'wolf brother film'.
Back on topic now.
-Nigilynog
Clan Guardian
bitayamoka
September 12th, 2007, 11:44 AM
Thank you to all of your comments!
I'm sorry for my reply is late!
(My PC is wrong since this competition was finished, and I'm not readily come to The Clan!)
You may use my arts if you enjoy it personally.
Of course you may print out and may put on the wall in your room!
(But please do not use my arts on web without my permission.)
I'm very glad that you like my arts!
Thanks!
brownowljess
September 13th, 2007, 01:08 PM
Very, very impressed with your drawings. Well done!
Nim
September 13th, 2007, 04:58 PM
Wow amazing artwork. An who said anything abput your english not being good? It's great! Well done and Good Luck!
chronicler
September 15th, 2007, 07:35 PM
that is some talent you have there, my friend. kuods to you. i am delighted to stop in my travels and admire it!
Fantom Wolf
September 15th, 2007, 10:44 PM
Awesome Can you tell me when you started drawing, I wish i could draw like that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wolf-queen4
September 16th, 2007, 08:16 PM
Wow they are sooooo cool, i wish i could draw like that :D
Trogdor the Burniator
September 18th, 2007, 09:19 PM
reallly good artwork! i could never ever ever ever EVER draw that good. peroid.
mayahuskee
September 20th, 2007, 08:45 PM
I must say, that I am madly jealous of your mad art skillz. :D They are wonderful. ^^ You should post more ! <3
armouredbear
September 22nd, 2007, 01:15 AM
please help me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! your so great and im so bad.only joking but can you give me any tips on drawing
Swift Arrows
September 22nd, 2007, 05:26 PM
Brilliant drawings, Bitayamoka!
You have a lot of detail in them, it impresses me!
I hope to see more of your work as and when you do them.
Haru
September 23rd, 2007, 01:32 PM
Wow! Your drawings are really amazing!!!!!
honshuwolf
September 24th, 2007, 12:15 AM
Cool pics Bitayamoka! Very...admirable, you did a great job on both Torak and Wolf, stars for you^^
Beawulf
September 25th, 2007, 08:24 PM
Nice drawing! :D
Im a realy good drawer too, bitayamoka.
But ill never be that good.
Good luck in the Competition!
tigereye
September 25th, 2007, 08:35 PM
Those are some really good drawings.I admire them because they have very good details and shape, keep up good work.
lishawty
September 26th, 2007, 05:18 PM
Wow Bityamoka! These are fantastic! Your drawing has an awesome style, and your colouring and shading is just great.
Fantastic... Good luck! :thumb:
that is sooooooooooo kool
Kari
September 28th, 2007, 06:37 AM
amazing I love it!!!!!
kelpie
September 28th, 2007, 03:31 PM
You drawings are great i'll have ago when i work out how to upload stuff.
dreamlord
September 28th, 2007, 04:12 PM
great work bitayamoka!
Wolfwings
September 29th, 2007, 01:04 AM
Great Job!
Sprit Walker
September 29th, 2007, 07:20 PM
They are really good. :)
Renian of the Wolf Clan
October 4th, 2007, 12:59 AM
i love the drawings on your website especialy Bale he looks so hot! O.o sorry, just my opinion. Wolf looks amazing too. Well done Bitayamoka!
doctermad
October 4th, 2007, 05:28 PM
WOWWWW!!!!!!!! I like how you added the scar on his on his tatoo in as well.
Wolffang
October 5th, 2007, 03:05 AM
*stands and looks in amazement* I wish I was the best artist in the world...we all have dreams.
Open heart
October 5th, 2007, 04:13 PM
Those are fantastic, your so good at art. i wish i was as good as you
Wolfcub xD
October 8th, 2007, 08:35 AM
nice anime drawings, wow you're really good.. haha wow. wow.. im usually too lazy to colour in anything haha ^^ love it.
i wanna see more. :D haha
May the clan guardian run with you~~
forest dweller
October 8th, 2007, 09:19 AM
Yes, I also really wanna see more from you!! Those drawings are amazing, and I'd love to see you draw more CoAD characters :D
CheetahClanGirl
October 14th, 2007, 03:59 PM
:o!!!! im envious of your work (that means im jealous because i know your not that good at english) you'll definately win!!
sky rider
October 16th, 2007, 01:56 PM
Thoes Drawings are AMAZING!!!!!!!!! Well done!
Nigilynog
October 16th, 2007, 03:32 PM
:o!!!! im envious of your work (that means im jealous because i know your not that good at english) you'll definately win!!
This is from a competition from a different month - she's already won.
-Nigilynog
Clan Guardian
sky rider
October 16th, 2007, 04:37 PM
Hi Bitayamoka, im in the second year of high school, im good at drawing and I hope to be as good as you are one day........
Your drawings are amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
JosieHart
October 16th, 2007, 07:23 PM
Blimey. Just... wow. You're incredible. Glad to hear it, Nigilynog - she deserves to win!
Keani
October 17th, 2007, 05:23 PM
that is the greatest art i have ever seen!!!!!!
Fintoraksaeunn
October 19th, 2007, 12:46 AM
Wow, awesome jobs with the pics! You really captured the essence of Wolf!
Fintoraksaeunn
October 19th, 2007, 01:01 AM
Great job with the pics! You really captured the two of them! Keep it up!:huge::wolf:
Renian of the Wolf Clan
October 19th, 2007, 11:25 AM
you guys (and girls) should check out her website. the fan art on there is fantastic!
swordfish
October 19th, 2007, 02:37 PM
wow. that is great!
bobakabobdude
October 20th, 2007, 03:04 PM
its just how i really pictured torak and wolf they are amazing :)
Winterwolfcub
October 25th, 2007, 11:08 AM
:wolf: cool
seaturtle
October 25th, 2007, 03:46 PM
that is just plain COOL. keep up the great work. :bitelip:
Spirit Wanderer
October 26th, 2007, 08:55 PM
Wow. You deserved to win! They are amazing!! (:
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